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Julia's Term 3 Recount Of Kiwi Can

This is my story about Kiwi Can it might have some mistakes but I would like you to comment on my work and then it will be complete!!!

Kiwi can chuck the chicken!

2016

Kiwi Can is my favorite thing ever. Monday I went to Kiwi can and Then we played chuck the chicken.

Chuck the chicken is a really fun game and all you need is about 1 class or any amount you want but I prefer 1. Then you have a fielding team and a throwing team. The throwing team has to go around in a circle and when Nathan said: chuck the chicken: then the person that has the chicken in their hand gets to throw the chicken to the fielding team.

Next when they have thrown the chicken they need to run around the circle before the fielding team has formed a line. If they have formed a line before you get around the circle then they get a point instead of you.

I never got to throw the chicken or catch the chicken but next time I play it I will try to get the chicken or throw the chicken

The chicken was really a cow but we thought it would sound bad saying: chuck the cow: it just doesn’t make a lot of sense, does it?

I kept on persisting and persisting means integrity and integrity means doing the right things when no one's looking. like, if my friend was a little upset because she didn’t get a lollipop and everyone was teasing her i would give her MY lollipop instead of teasing her like everyone else.Chuck the chicken is so much fun I hope that one day I could play it again.

Popcorn Capacity

In Maths we are learning about Capacity. We used popcorn to find out the capacity of a glass. First we guessed how many spoonfuls of popcorn kernels it took to fill the cup. I guessed 12 but it actually took 20 spoonfuls. Next we popped the corn on the oven. We had to guess how much popped corn filed the cup. I guessed 5. The capacity of the popped corn in the cup was 12 spoonfuls.

 

 

lorde

1. Lorde was born on 7 November 1996.
2. Lorde is a singer song writer
3. lorde's real name is Ella Marija lani yalich-o'connor
4. Lorde is a GREAT singer because I listen to her songs every weekend
5.  Lorde is a new Zealander.

I think she is great because she is my role-model

spirit in motion #3

If I were  able to make a new PARALYMPICS game I would make it fun for everyone to play. The game is called, 'The Bear Game'.

How you play: 
 You have a person dressed up as a bear.  They need to act like a REAL bear! 
The players need to try and get past the fake bear.

The rules:
1. You can not get a gun and shoot the bear. If you did, your outta the game and you would of killed the person inside of the suit! 
2. You can't cheat!
3.You need to have... FUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

capacity and volume

We have been learning about Capacity and Volume. Capacity is how much the container can hold. Volume is how much is in that container at the time. We filled different containers with rice and water.